I wouldn't fix any of that now because time spent trying to make it a more ordered consistent non-first drafty text would be time better spent making more words. So if I do put it up it will be just as jumbled and unpolished as it is at the moment.
I was wondering what those who would actually be faced with deciphering the out of order inconsistent text thought of that.
I tend to abide by the sausage principle here. (Also applies to laws and technical standards.) Wait until you have an actual first draft that you're willing to show to people and have torn apart. The problem with reading something as it's put together is that one can't then usefully comment on the final version, because one always has the memories of the earlier versions in the back of one's mind. (This is much the same reason that editors and beta readers are necessary: they can come to the text cold, while an author can't.)ReplyDelete