tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post6824632725292682008..comments2024-02-24T03:34:18.060-05:00Comments on Stealing Commas: Narnia, if the heroes did their jobs: Caspian and Coriakinchris the cynichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06872875475212333027noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post-32227825107779386582016-10-16T22:24:25.604-04:002016-10-16T22:24:25.604-04:00I love this! It's a knock-down, drag-out figh...I love this! It's a knock-down, drag-out fight without being physical in any way. It's Caspian AS A KING, judging and ruling. That Coriakin is a great fallen star, powerful and terrible, adds so much delicious tension to the scene; when I read this, I was waiting for Coriakin to snap and attack, even as Caspian, by force of will and weight of the crown, refutes his arguments.<br /><br />This is a Caspian who DESERVES his crown, and you, dear writer, are better than Lewis by far.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com