tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post589513154750480213..comments2024-02-24T03:34:18.060-05:00Comments on Stealing Commas: Edith and Ben - Can I Come?chris the cynichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06872875475212333027noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post-39438509797272242852017-10-06T02:58:15.219-04:002017-10-06T02:58:15.219-04:00I am thoroughly in love with all your Twilight wri...I am thoroughly in love with all your Twilight writing so far, but this? This is just extra marvelous. I am so delighted by Edith, who loves fixing cars and has such sensible, non-stalkery reasons to accompany Ben to Seattle. I love how you've let her anachronistic language span so many different time periods so naturally. I love how Ben savors and ponders every one. I love these two. I wish all young adult supernatural stuff could be told like this, with characters who are mysterious and compelling and possibly dangerous without being creepy domestic abusers. <br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15485002308518990942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post-33679577948955582102011-11-07T05:10:13.382-05:002011-11-07T05:10:13.382-05:00This is your genius: you whip up multiple layers o...This is your genius: you whip up multiple layers of depth to a character in just a few exchanges.Firedrakenoreply@blogger.com