tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post4522720663602723080..comments2024-02-24T03:34:18.060-05:00Comments on Stealing Commas: Breaking up can be easychris the cynichttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06872875475212333027noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post-47141817488782232812015-03-20T15:58:50.292-04:002015-03-20T15:58:50.292-04:00Nicely done. It seems that the real things are ha...Nicely done. It seems that the real things are hard to get into fiction precisely because they aren't overly dramatic. You did well with making it real and engaging without the excess drama.WingedBeasthttp://wingedbeast.dreamwidth.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post-61215308958868000982015-03-18T20:25:28.157-04:002015-03-18T20:25:28.157-04:00No awfulness, acrimony, awkwardness, agression.
A...No awfulness, acrimony, awkwardness, agression.<br /><br />Also no weapons or implements of torture that start with a, which I started to think of but decided not to share. DawnMnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post-307489606188036762015-03-18T20:10:47.845-04:002015-03-18T20:10:47.845-04:00That was good.That was good.chris the cynichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06872875475212333027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post-91595132109997429492015-03-18T19:47:11.861-04:002015-03-18T19:47:11.861-04:00This seems somewhat relevant:
https://www.youtube...This seems somewhat relevant:<br /><br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mdJ6aUB2K4gLonesparkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16278753827545905559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3889388775673754833.post-64996840921520710632015-03-18T18:17:37.048-04:002015-03-18T18:17:37.048-04:00This is nice. I know what you mean, and this is a ...This is nice. I know what you mean, and this is a good aversion of the trope.Packbathttp://packbat.net/w/noreply@blogger.com